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Lauran's avatar

This is so beautiful! I love the contrast between the two pieces. I think 5 & 6 especially stood out to me because I've been doing a lot of work recently on my tendency to people please. It has almost become a reflex for me to give my power away, to cater to what I think others want or expect of me. I'm trying to take that power back.

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Yomalis Rosario's avatar

really love this, and how this one reads like a poem. so i noticed that the ones quoted toward the end in the previous one were in 2nd person and the ones quoted in this one were in the first person. some of the parts in "i am not enough" felt like statements where i wasn't sure who the speaker is (like should these have quotations marks, too? why don't they). in this one, the "you" feels less antagonized and more like self speaking to self from a more grounded, neutral place

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